A.J Styles Debut

Sparks Shower As The Titan Tron Turns On

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Edward: Who is this young kid walking down the ramp

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Chris: Lets wait and find out

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A.J Styles enters the ring

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A.J Styles: Hello everyone and welcome to Darkness Wrestling my name is A.J Styles i am out here today to explain why i wanted to join Darkness Wrestling. I see there is alot of young talent behind this locker room and i wanted to be a part of it. Every time i watch Darkness Wrestling i see them busting their guts putting their Blood, Sweat and tears and they still come back fighting for more. But this is not why i am here giving this speech today i see there is a Championship belt called the DW New Blood Champion and there is this tournament going on and i got entered and i got to face 2 other men in a triple threat match. my opponents are Cammileri and Junior "The Champ Cadima. by the way i didnt think i would be in this position on my first night but anyway i am up for a challenge. everyone thank you for listening and i hope you enjoy my match later on and i hope i entertain.

reasonable .... just a few corrections

Sparks Shower As The Titan Tron Turns On

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Edward: Who is this young man walking down the ramp

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Chris: Lets wait and find out

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A.J Styles enters the ring

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A.J Styles: Hello everyone and welcome to Darkness Wrestling my name is A.J Styles I am out here today to explain why I wanted to join Darkness Wrestling. I see there is a lot of young talent behind this locker room and I wanted to be a part of it. Every time I watch Darkness Wrestling I see them busting their guts putting their Blood, Sweat and tears and they still come back fighting for more. But this is not why I am here giving this speech today I see there is a Championship belt called the DW New Blood Champion and there is this tournament going on and I got entered and I got to face 2 other men in a triple threat match. My opponents are Camilleri and Junior "The Champ" Cadima. By the way I didn't think i would be in this position on my first night but anyway I am up for a challenge. Everyone thank you for listening and I hope you enjoy my match later on and I hope I entertain.


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changed kid to man ... seems more appropriate for a wrestler and it's also being used in another RP - I don't want it to sound like all our RP were written by the same person. The other thing is - PUNCTUATION .... I'm getting tired of telling this to everyone - use a dictionary and a spellchecker program. And this goes to everyone not just you - please use I not i .... check it in a grammar book some time - unless it's part of a word it should be a capital letter(not sure if that is the way they formulated the rule exactly but that is what I know from my about 10 years of studying the language)