Dave McGavin Debut

Dave McGavin walks to the ring

Crowd boos

Dave: You did it DW fans! Congradulations! You made it through the horrors of the so called "wrestling" that is offered here in DW but now................. now you are saved! I the "Shooter" the "Main Event" the "Most Elite Man in wrestling" has saved you from the boredom and the predictable! Now I want you fans to stand up and chant "Shooter" come on "Shooter" "Shooter"

Crowd boos and starts a you suck chant

Dave: Well then is this the thanks i get? I could have went anywhere but i decided to come here and i-

Drake Darke's music plays

Drake grabs McGavin mic

Drake: Dave i checked your resume and YOU HAVENT ACCOMPLOSIHED ANYTHING!

crowd cheers

Dave: What you kidding me? I was a former world heavyweight champion and i-

Drake: SHUT UP! You were lucky enough to be part of the roster! I dont care you did if you even did anything whereever you were but you shouldnt be talking-

Dave slaps Drake

Drake powerbombs McGavin

Drake grabs a chair and goes for a chair shot but McGavin back out of the ring

Dave: youll be sorry Drake! youll be sorry!

you are talking by Blackwing...


go here https://darknesswrestling.forumotion.com/announcements-read-sticky-and-announce-threads-before-continuing-f2/rp-help-structuring-and-format-t47.htm

boykilrer's right you need to read rp format in announcements, and fix this. Also I have a question for you, are you trying to challenge me cage or Blackwing, or what? Its just really not that clear what your trying to get across, at least to me.

yeah i realized it and its a beginners mistake im new remember but a fast learner i wrote a storyline format so u can read tht i guess

its ok I understand now i read the storyline, just weve had people that will just post an rp, and expect everyonr to know whats going on in the story.

don't create seperate topics for the same char on the same show ... just make it clear that the RP is broken down in parts that are to be used sepertely....

here is your RP only formatted properly. this is the one and only time I will do this for you.... most people even if they don't get it right at least try to format their RP- next time you post something like this I wont even bother responding to It - I'll simply delete the topic.

Dave McGavin walks to the ring
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Crowd boos
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Dave: You did it DW fans! Congradulations! You made it through the horrors of the so called "wrestling" that is offered here in DW but now................. now you are saved! I the "Shooter" the "Main Event" the "Most Elite Man in wrestling" has saved you from the boredom and the predictable! Now I want you fans to stand up and chant "Shooter" come on "Shooter" "Shooter"
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Crowd boos and starts a you s**k chant
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Dave: Well then is this the thanks i get? I could have went anywhere but i decided to come here and i-

Drake Darke's music plays
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Drake grabs McGavin mic
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Drake: Dave i checked your resume and YOU HAVENT ACCOMPLOSIHED ANYTHING!
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crowd cheers
.
Dave: What you kidding me? I was a former world heavyweight champion and i-
.
Drake: SHUT UP! You were lucky enough to be part of the roster! I dont care you did if you even did anything wherever you were but you shouldn't be talking-
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Dave slaps Drake
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Drake powerbombs McGavin
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Drake grabs a chair and goes for a chair shot but McGavin back out of the ring
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Dave: youll be sorry Drake! youll be sorry!